Wednesday, December 10, 2014

Exercise 3 Descriptive writing part 2

The girl with dark hair stands on the curb on the Vaughn Eames parking lot waiting for a ride. Her hair gently blows in the winds while she stands stoically staring down the row of parked cars. She is wearing a jean vest with tight black leggings and bright yellow high top vans shoes that are so bright they seem out of place in the dirty parking lot.
She thinks to her self
"what am I doing here? I sit and wait for a ride for 30 minutes ride in a car for another 45 after sitting in class for almost 9 hour... I should listen to my aunt and go to hair dressing school."
A group of frat boys walks pass and they all smile at her.
She just glares at them and turns her head in the other direction.
As cars pass and accelerate they leave a cloud of smoke that engulfs her and makes her eyes water.
As she rubs her eyes and turns her back alway and curses
"Asshole!"
To her a girl from a small beach town this parking lot is almost worse then the dump. She holds he books closly to her chest and closes her eyes.
A car honks and she opens her eyes. A figure is waving for her to get into the car. she quickly bolts to the car and jumps in. The car speeds off into the parking lot with the dark hair girl looking out the window at the passing parked cars.

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